dimecres, 10 de desembre del 2008

COMPOSITION:

Here there's my composition of Unit 2, I think. We had to do it, with 10 objects that our teacher said to us. It wasn't very difficult, but you'd to think about it. I hope you'll enjoy my composition!




Once upon a time, Mr. Smith and his three children: two girls and a boy. They all were living in a normal house, in California, USA. But Mr Smith wife was dead.

Mr Smith had a lot of money and some estrange things: a radio that can tune people’s thought’s, a magic Jacuzzi, a magic cash card, a magic washing machine that rinse out ones problems, a suitcase that holds anything and a pair of training super sonic shoes for speeding. But Smith children’s didn’t know that.

Two weeks later, Smith committed suicide. His old daughter found his testament and she read it: “Dear children, I committed suicide because I don’t do anything here, in the earth. I leave these things to you: Dina you can go to the roof and take my magic credit card that always has money and a magic Jacuzzi, Alan, my only son, you can take a radio that you can tune people’s thought’s and also my magic washing machine that rinse your problems, and finally my little daughter, Rouse, you can take a suitcase that holds anything and my training super sonic shoes for speeding. I also have one more thing… a hamster who’s really a pop star. That’s all. I hope you have a good life and you were always happy.”

They all felt sad but also curious about these things because they didn’t know anything about their existence. Then they left the house and did their separate lives.

Dina didn’t stop to buy things and she finally lived in a very big and luxury palace, with her magic Jacuzzi that relaxed her. She became a feminist princess of Europe. She has all she wanted. But she never had love.

Alan was always listening to people’s thoughts and if he listened to a problem he put it in the wash machine! It was also fantastic and he finally wanted to be a punk! He became popular too because he had one virtue: Knowing people’s thoughts. But despite everything, he didn’t have love.

Finally, Rouse with her hamster, the suitcase and a pair of training shoes became a pop star like the hamster. They did lots of concert, they put megaphones and instruments inside the suitcase and then they travelled around the world with training super sonic shoes! But they didn’t have love…

At that moment, they thought if the committed suicide of their father was good or bad. Since their father died, they didn’t have love

After years they met again and decided to live in the same house, to share their strange things and to give love among them!

That’s a lovely story, did you like it?




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